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Serpent sighting

It might be a little silly, but I spotted a serpent being played in the ensemble in one of the scenes in Pride and Prejudice (TV serial). anybody else have any sightings? --W0lfie 01:36, 19 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

A woman used to attend Tubachristmas events in the southern New England area and play the serpent. I haven't seen her recently. Counterfit 05:52, 21 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

In the 1956 film The Case of the Mukkinese Battle Horn (starring Peter_Sellers, Spike_Milligan and Dick_Emery), the eponymous instrument appears to be a serpent. Heraldica (talk) 21:17, 1 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

@Heraldica: I don't know why it's taken me 14 years, but I've added a sentence to the film page! — Jon (talk) 11:38, 6 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I recently saw a serpent in a Depeche Mode video. I unfortunately did not make a note of which one and when I looked for it later, I could not find it. Will update here when I do. In a semi-related note, the music video for Everything Counts features a shawm, even though the sound is produced by a synthesizer on the studio recording. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Riaanvn (talk • contribs) 07:30, 13 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Riaanvn the music video for "Frontier Psychiatrist" by The Avalanches features the serpent. Perhaps we need a § In popular culture Jon (talk) 01:25, 31 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I am adding a new subsection, where we can stage the edits. Once we have 3 good entries, we can transfer to the main article (and leave the less notable or incomplete entries in Talk). Riaanvn (talk) 08:49, 11 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

In popular culture

In the 1956 film The Case of the Mukkinese Battle Horn (starring Peter_Sellers, Spike_Milligan and Dick_Emery), the eponymous instrument appears to be a serpent.
A serpent is being played in the ensemble in one of the scenes in Pride and Prejudice (TV serial).
The music video for Frontier Psychiatrist by The Avalanches features the serpent.
The International Tuba Euphonium Association adopted the serpent as its emblem when it was first established (as T.U.B.A.) in 1973.^[1]
The Alien (soundtrack) to the 1979 film features the serpent for when the alien Xenomorph appears. ^[2]

References

^ Leeka, Carter I. (1977). "History of the Tubists Universal Brotherhood Association". T.U.B.A. Journal. V (1): 14–16. Archived from the original on 4 January 2011. Retrieved 26 April 2011.
^ "Cue By Cue: Film Music Narratives: Alien (Goldsmith, 1979)". Cue By Cue. 2016-02-29. Retrieved 2023-11-11.

Done

Alien

Jerry Goldsmith used the serpent in his score to Alien. It's sometimes part of the orchestral fabric but, every now and then, it gets a solo! Gingermint (talk) 21:08, 7 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, I just found it on the Internet when googling, and saw your edit on this page after an entry to section In popular culture. Riaanvn (talk) 08:59, 11 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Done

Modern revival

The article barely mentions Christopher Monk, who possibly even deserves his own page(?). History section needs a "modern revival" section, covering his work, the English Serpent Trio, revival of interest spread to Europe and North America (Doug Yeo, others), use in historically informed performance practice, and so on. Dumping this here as a note-to-self, or in case someone else notices it and wants to get started.—Jon (talk) 00:10, 5 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Done

Anaconda

I've added CC-BY photographs of the truly stupendously large 1840 restored contrabass serpent (sometimes called the "anaconda") from Musical Instrument Museums Edinburgh to Commons, ready for deployment here at some stage (1, 2). Good refs in Bevan's Tuba Family (2nd ed.), the Cambridge Encyclopedia of Brass Instruments, and Doug Yeo's Illustrated Dictionary. — Jon (talk) 11:50, 6 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Done

Playing technique, historical repertoire

For some reason (probably an excess of enthusiasm combined with its lack of citations) some of the material from earlier revisions has been removed, covering historical repertoire, playing technique, methods, fingerings in particular. I'll have a go at re-introducing it with citations (Myers, Baines, Bevan, Yeo, etc.) Jon (talk) 01:53, 31 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

Passed. Marshelec (talk) 02:54, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Marshelec (talk · contribs) 22:16, 13 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I am planning to review this article over the next week.Marshelec (talk) 22:16, 13 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Review comments

Lead

I am open to persuasion on this issue, but it might be clearer for readers to describe it in the first sentence as a wind instrument. Telling a reader that it is a brass instrument, and then telling them it is made of wood and leather is confusing (even though the article on brass instrument covers this (confusing) point. Another option is to add a sentence explaining the broad scope/classification of brass instruments.
I sympathise :) Organologists have even started using the word labrosone to mean anything sounded by vibrating ("buzzing") the lips on an aperture or mouthpiece (confusingly called "trumpets" in the Hornbostel–Sachs classification system, 423), rather than confuse everyone with the word "brass". Obvious confusions are saxophones, sarrusophones, and even flutes which are woodwind instruments made of brass, and serpents, cornetts, and the didgeridoo, which are brass instruments made of wood. It doesn't help that the brass instrument article is pretty woeful. Anyway, I'll have a think about this one. — Jon (talk) 08:27, 14 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
in the first sentence, the phrase (later with keys) breaks the flow, and does not seem essential here. This point is covered in the body.
the wikilink for wood seems unnecessary. It is an everyday word understood by most readers in context, as per MOS:OL
however, it would be useful to link bass to Bass (instrument)
an additional sentence or two is needed about repertoire and recent revival

Construction

The original serpent is typically built in 8′ C from hardwood, .. I suggest "was built". Also, it is a bit confusing for readers to introduce the 8′ C in this way. I suggest a separate phrase or sentence about the fundamental pitch of the instrument (or whatever is the most appropriate term), leaving this sentence about construction with just the materials.
Each piece is made by gluing two hollowed halves together to make a tubular segment, which are then bonded together and bound with an outer covering of leather. This would be better either split into two sentences, or reworked as "Each piece is made by gluing two hollowed halves together to make a tubular segment, and the multiple segments are then joined together and bound with an outer covering of leather"
..improve the serpent's inherent intonation problems. This begs the question: "what problems ?"
I am open to persuasion, but I think that the section Contrabass serpent would be better relocated under the History heading. (This would also overcome the problem of serpent ordinaire being introduced here, when it is currently defined in the History section below.)

History

..sprang up in the early 19th century. suggest ".. were developed in the early 19th century" (I have visions of serpents springing up to attack passersby !!)
..the layouts of these instruments more resemble that of a bassoon, delete "more"
..a short U-shaped butte joint what is a butte joint ? Should this be just "butt" ?
link Prussian to Prussia (I don't think Prussia is covered by MOS:OL)
..and wrote for it in several of his works would be better as: "and wrote for the instrument in several of his works"
..one of the last innovations of the upright serpent would be better as: "..one of the last incarnations of the upright serpent"
..which helped to propel interest and their more widespread availability. would be better as: "..which helped to raise interest in these instruments and increase their availability"

Repertoire

The content of this section is currently about relatively recent repertoire. The section title could perhaps be "Modern repertoire" or similar (unless some additional content is added about early repertoire).

Soprano and tenor versions ?

One of the cited sources appears to indicate that Soprano and tenor versions of the serpent are available ? [1]. Is this worth a brief mention ? ✔
Added a § Sizes under § Construction

Closing

@Jonathanischoice: - only a couple of small points left to go :) Marshelec (talk) 02:42, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I'll have a go at expanding on the early repertoire, depending on what is out there, and possibly a little bit about playing technique, since there are some public domain 19th C. serpent method books and fingering charts which might be good to include. The small soprano/alto "wyrm" serpent certainly exists, but is hardly more than a novelty; but then, so is the anaconda. Perhaps a "sizes" section. This all might take a day or two. Cheers — Jon (talk) 03:00, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
...or perhaps it just takes an afternoon re-reading some books :) try now. — Jon (talk) 06:42, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

"Worn (instrument)" listed at Redirects for discussion

The redirect Worn (instrument) has been listed at redirects for discussion to determine whether its use and function meets the redirect guidelines. Readers of this page are welcome to comment on this redirect at Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion/Log/2023 November 2 § Worn (instrument) until a consensus is reached. TartarTorte 19:45, 2 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Yes that was me, sorry - a silly typo.—Jon (talk) 06:40, 13 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Done

Not a "brass" instrument

The third sentence in the lede is ridiculous: "It is named for its long, conical bore bent into a snakelike shape, and unlike most brass instruments is made from wood..." A "brass" instrument made from "wood"? The Hornbostel–Sachs classification is 423.213; there is no "brass" category in Hornbostel-Sachs. The instrument category is: an aerophone with an enclosed air column that is set into vibration directly by the player's lips. Most such aerophones are, indeed, made of metal, usually brass, but some are made of wood or other materials (e.g., bone). A "brass" instrument is an instrument in this category that is made of brass. Other instruments in the category share characteristics with brass instruments, but are not themselves "brass instruments"; the serpent is one of these. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.95.43.253 (talk) 20:18, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Labrosones are colloquially "brass" instruments. Is a saxophone a woodwind instrument? Or a labrosone? Is a pumpkin a fruit or a vegetable? Depends if you're talking to a botanist or a member of the general public. Do we require the general reader to be familiar with academic classification schemes like Hornbostel–Sachs in the first three sentences of this article? — Jon (talk) 23:28, 21 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done — Jon (talk) 22:26, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The Serpent Source Book

Dr. Beth Chouinard-Mitchell's forthcoming magnum opus The Serpent Source Book should make a great resource for this article... — Jon (talk) 23:17, 7 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

West gallery music

The article's history section makes no mention of the west gallery music tradition particularly in southern England, where the serpent survived the storms of low brass instrument innovation throughout most of the 19th century. There are scant resources available, but mentioned in Klaus Trumpets and Other High Brass vol. 2, and Harry Woodhouse's 2003 self-published book may be useful (as a starting point at least, if not possibly qualifying as a WP:RS). — Jon (talk) 22:26, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

[Leeka-1] Leeka, Carter I. (1977). "History of the Tubists Universal Brotherhood Association". T.U.B.A. Journal. V (1): 14–16. Archived from the original on 4 January 2011. Retrieved 26 April 2011.

[2] "Cue By Cue: Film Music Narratives: Alien (Goldsmith, 1979)". Cue By Cue. 2016-02-29. Retrieved 2023-11-11.

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